Meeting agenda
Folio
Works, substrates, presentation.
Writing
Submitted assignments for LCP and Studio for feedback.
Revised LCP Objectives and Rational assignment for troubleshooting and additional feedback.
Studio Critical Review assignment for feedback, time permitting.
High priority
Objectives – They are what I am having the most trouble with.
Opening two paragraphs of rationale – I don’t understand what Jan is suggesting.
Notes
Swap paragraph 1 and 2
First paragraph: How and why (what I used and why) - how does this connect to my methodology.
Second paragraph: Story.
Objectives
Incorporate sentences to encapsulate each objective.
Do not repeat.
Ensure each element is covered.
How do art and music relate to the project?
Explain more clearly.
What role does music play in the research?
Community and cultural hub.
Comes in through interviews with musicians.
Can I be fucked explaining this part of the process?
Probably not. It is probably no longer relevant other than these people are my mates and kindred spirits.
Music no longer has a part to play in this project or in my research.
Although, art and the creative process is still a critical factor and relates directly to my research.
Research question.
David doesn’t understand the question.
Break it down and simplify.
Be clear and concise.
Should read intangible, NOT temporal.
Be more concise and better articulate objectives what, how and why.
Fragmentation inspired by gestalt (reference fragmentation.
Explain “novel gestalt”.
Haptics – Subjects.
Haptics – Part of methodology (explain).
Performative collaboration in ICMX and photograms – Subjects.
General
Rewrite objectives, statement and rationale. Check active verbs, transition words, answer words and question words.
Be mindful of what, how and why.
Double-check writing notes.